Friday, April 23, 2010

Our Thin Costumes (Poetry) (Kristin) (sp2010)

Hey, here's what I did for this poetry piece.  Let me know what you think (I think the font may be too faint...) -

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  1. henri del rosarioApril 24, 2010 at 7:31 PM

    hi kristin,

    i think this page is very good. the cloth thing parallels the 'cotton' and the 'sock' and the 'puppet' and 'flesh' imagery of the poem, as well as giving a feminine and domestic tone that the poem partly conveys.

    i think you may need to darken the background a little more, so that the white text may be more stark, but overall very good!

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  2. SannyApril 25, 2010 at 2:30 PM

    I like the movement of the cloth, but the image is quite pixelated?

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  3. Ian FApril 25, 2010 at 4:10 PM

    I agree. I really like the background image, but it looks pixelated.

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